Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Perusasive writing

Dear Mr. Conti,


" I don't like indoor recess, there's nothing to do!" Is a complaint that you can hear at any school. We can change this by having indoor recess in the gym. Facts from experienced people are soon to be said.


  First of all, pupils want a change of scenery once in a while. Pupils also need space to run around if they're not outside. At indoor recess they don't have the chance to run around. With that being said lets talk about Health matters.


If they have recess in the gym for exercise they will have a lower risk of getting the following:
  • Heart disease
  • Cancer
  • Arthritis
  • Etc.
These are common sicknesses that you will find in older people, usually because they didn't get enough exercise as a kid. Of course you might think this is all wrong but, if you ask a local doctor this, he/she would say this was all true. These facts are said to be true by my doctor,Yavashian. Now let's talk about exercise matters.


 If kids don't have enough exercise they can get the sicknesses that are above. They will also get tightness in their joints. Even if students have recess in the gym once a week, that will most likely be enough to get through the week because they can still get exercise at home. If kids had recess in the gym, there would be lower obesity.


Consider this letter an answer to all questions to lower obesity. Most kids will be happier in the gym for indoor recess. Consider this letter.


    Sincerely
         Jada McNair

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